Yes, having compared the two, this one is more polished and varied. As I said before, if the lead instrument wan a mandolin or balalaika, it would sound even better but you play what you play. Perhaps a bit of a "middle eight" different from the main tune might improve it. Kind of like a "chorus". It does sound a little like a tune comprising verses only, so some kind of "hook" in the middle might improve it. But that's just being picky.